That is a powerful poem, and should probably speak particularly strongly to those with the same religious beliefs as you. However, I'm glad you set your priorities straight.
The rhyming did seem a bit forced at points in the poem, but other than that I thought it was pretty good.

Thank u for the honesty. i had a difficult time writing this poem because i had so much on my mind and there were so many things i wanted to say but i just couldnt find the right way to put them. hopefully i can fix it soon.