Bad Day

by Wasted Fake Smiles   May 15, 2006


Bad Day
~*Who Cares?*~

I feel that I should tell you of my day,
Because today the sky was extra gray.
Nothing went right, everything was wrong,
The day just was bad all along.

So I woke up today, and I felt bad,
My nose was all stuffy, and it made me sad.
I was going to see my mom, but I felt so sick,
So I popped in some pills to get better quick.

Well, my mom arrived, and we went to have fun,
As we drove to the beach with little caution.
We drove over mountains so windy and long,
Making me so sick, while the radio played the DUMBEST song.

We got to the beach, but she wanted to know what was ahead,
So we kept going, so we could be fed.
We got so lost, it wasn't even funny,
With nothing but the clothes on our backs and some money.

After an hour of being lost we finally found,
A place to eat, with many people abound.
Once we ate, we got back on the road,
Back to the beach, but my head felt like it were to explode!

We arrived at the beach, yet we were in jeans,
And all the people were old, no hot teens!
So, we got in the water and splashed around,
We had so much fun until I fell to the ground.

As we walked back, to where my mom lay,
A bee stung my foot, which is NOT ok!
I took out the stinger, and then my foot swelled,
I walked to the car, as each step I yelled.

So then I came home, and since it's mother's day,
My step mom came over, and they had so much to say.
They were over here for 4 hours straight,
In that amount of time, I could've gone on a date.

But now the day's finally over, I'm bored and in pain,
My nose is still stuffy, and my foot look inhumane!
This was my day, completely true,
Would I EVER lie to you?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    I liked how it rhymed but idk i would probably give it a 3 1/2 out of five it was good but it wasnt like the rest of your poems keep up the good work though, i love your stuff

    this is tottaly what i am going through right now.... wow how is your boy taking it though? i love how you tottaly expressed your feelings and still made it sound amazing you have so much talent!

    Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

    -Laura