I liked how it rhymed but idk i would probably give it a 3 1/2 out of five it was good but it wasnt like the rest of your poems keep up the good work though, i love your stuff

this is tottaly what i am going through right now.... wow how is your boy taking it though? i love how you tottaly expressed your feelings and still made it sound amazing you have so much talent!

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura