by HOLLY ARMER May 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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With a heavy heart |
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Stormy is right Holly, this was just magnificent, I too am trying to write a few poems in different styles, I am in love with poetry, hope to be somewhat good someday..lol. Denise |
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I like this one even more than the last tanka I read. I love reading about things that have to do with writing. Don't know why. I think the process embodies everything life has to offer. |
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That was something short that makes a strong point. Nicely done. |
by Melissa
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Just beautiful! The flow was impeccable, every line is just perfect... Too hard to pick out a fovorite, really awesome work! |
by Timothy r
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You never cease to amaze my eyes with your fantastic poems, but I am not suprised, you do it every time. Love, Tim |