This was good. Liked it alot. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

`taleee xx

You never cease to amaze my eyes with your fantastic poems, but I am not suprised, you do it every time. Love, Tim

Just beautiful! The flow was impeccable, every line is just perfect... Too hard to pick out a fovorite, really awesome work!

That was something short that makes a strong point. Nicely done.
~Fallen

I like this one even more than the last tanka I read. I love reading about things that have to do with writing. Don't know why. I think the process embodies everything life has to offer.

Stormy is right Holly, this was just magnificent, I too am trying to write a few poems in different styles, I am in love with poetry, hope to be somewhat good someday..lol. Denise