Unusual, yet very overpowering. you never cease to amaze me!

shobhana

Wow, this is awesome too! I love the creativity within this poem...

"the daisy's laugh with vengeance"
^^^ Love this line, perfect ending also! Incredible poem!

"the daisy's laugh with vengeance" it should be 'daisies'

This poem made me think of the "he loves me, he loves me not" thing that people do when the pull flower petals off the stem.

Made me feel sorta lonely. =P

Great write again. I really enjoy reading your work. 5/5