Holly! You are simply amazing with words! I love the description of "tears rain upon my heart". Very vivid and besutifully tied together tanka.

love and peace
shobhana

This poem says so much with so little, I loved it as always, you inspire me to be a better poet, but also a better person, thank you for being you. Love, Tim

I love the opening 2 lines, so sad and beautiful! I really like this form, you really know how to work it! Awesome writing!

This was great. Quite impressive how you fit wondreful words into such a box. Interpretation of my last sentence: the words you used were amazing realizing the restrictions you were working with. You pulled it off perfectly though.

This is a wonderful poem=)

I thought your poem was surprisingly deep for such little writing

Thats really deep very good im loving it

To be so short, that's beautiful!

Gives a clear and powerful message in a few short lines. I don't know why it's rated a 3.4. You get a 5/5 from me!