This was awesome. I guess its made for like heavy metal or rock? Tehe. Have you got chords for it or anything?
I liked the chprus heaps, really catchy lol Awesome job! 5/5

`taleee xx

This is a really good poem. I really like how you capitalized scream to give it a 'loud' effect. That was really cool. Really good imagery as well, the whole picking away at the dust thing, that was nice. Awesome poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Do you like linkin park? figure 09?

Nope, well i listened to them a long long time ago, like on the radio, but why do you ask?

Checked out the song, and yeah my intro is the same, and that's hella weird. But I never listened to them or got that idea from them. I dont need to copy other lyrics. Been writing my own stuff for a long time now.

Great peice, very powerfully written with some well expressed aspects.