Falling Apart

by Always4You   May 15, 2006


Nothing is going right
Everything's fading away
My life is falling apart
I straggle in dismay

Once I was sure
Of my life and where it was going
Now I walk around in shadows
Not really knowing

Don't follow my lead
I'm not going anywhere
Torn in half, piece by piece
Far too broken for repair

I trusted you'd be there
But you weren't, you never were
You made me a promise that you couldn't keep
My life is now a blur

You were the biggest part of my life
Breaking your word, you let me fall
I don't think your word was ever true
Even when I needed you, you never answered my call

Life has lost its meaning
I no longer wish to be here
I'm constantly haunted by the memory
When you'd whisper sweet words in my ear

Those days are gone
I never really believed they were true
My life has fallen apart
All because I believed in you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like this Poem..
    It's sad, and I understood what you meant by it, flows well too, so keep up the good work..

    Also thanks for commenting my Poems..

    And..To answer your Question.. Lol.. Yeah, Sad poems and Love poems seem to be mostly my style, they just come to me easier then happy ones do. ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    Ah, and i stumble upon yet another noteworthy poem of yours.

    You are a gifted writer, the way you portray your thoughts and experiences has a certain effect that absorbs you into the poem.
    There is also room for ambiguous interpretations of your work.
    A truly inspiring read!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is sad. But I can relate. So I really like this piece. You expressed your emotions really clearly too. Another awesome job! Keep writing! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a really good poem. Very sad story and I can tell you threw your emotions into it. Great job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~ICanOnlyImagine~

    Life has lost its meaning
    I no longer wish to be here
    I'm constantly haunted by the memory
    When you'd whisper sweet words in my ear

    Again, great work!!! Theres not much i can say....lol

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