You changed

by gemowski   May 15, 2006


You're not the man you use to be, you've changed an awful lot to me,

we use to be happy giggle all the time but i feel like I've dyed inside.

many night id sit and cry, all i could wounder is why oh why.

how come you were taken away from me,
now you're not what you use to be,

you were the man of my dreams always brought me flowers and nice things.

by some freak of nature we were torn apart now i am left with an old broken heart.

because you changed and life seems strange not living it out with you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The meaning is alright but it is repetitive in parts as in you keep repeating that he's changd. Try going into detail about what the speaker might be feeling through all this. Next you might want to try not to force the rhymes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    The meaning of this poem really gets through to me and i can relate a lot.. it makes my tummy rumble lol haha i can think of a lot of times i have had those same thoughts... keep em coming and check out my stuff too!

    **meggie**

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