by Renea May 15, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Do you lead a life or merely exist? |
by Brigitte
A very strongly written poem! The questions and then end expressed your point very clearly! Again you might want to work on the way you display your poetry and the format. It looks a lot more appealing and easier to read for the readers eyes |
Very, very good. I like the shit out of this, its like reading a paragraph out of my life's book. You can check out some of my stuff if you like. keep it up its awesome. |