Even Though..

by Meggie33   May 15, 2006


Even though you tell me she is prettier than I,
For whom at night, does you heart truely cry?

While alone at night, wishing she'd be in your reach,
Whose voice is it you hear, when to god you do preach?

For how long was she at your side, when you were in trouble past your bounds,
Was it her not myself, that picked you up off the ground?

For I do deeply believe, I am more of a woman that this girl,
Shall you dare to tell me, that she means to you the world?

You have always been the kind of man, who rubs my flaws in like you don't even care,
But for just the other night, when you were in need was it her or I that was there?

Upon which standards shall you look me in the eye and say,
You don't mean anything to me, now please go away?

You know as well as I do, that I shall risk my life for you,
But when the going gets tough, shall she stand tall by yourself, as I do?

Would she stand up to the law, and get herself kicked out of a dance,
Just to show you, on how high of a standard you do stand?

For you would she risk it? About anything else would she care,
Would she adjust her schedule and add plans, if she knew you would be there?

Would she lose friends, and break trusts, just to grow a bond closer to thee,
I would say she shall not, she's not as devoted as I shall be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This is only the second one I've read of yours, but I can already tell you write with pure emotion, right from the heart. You put everything into your words and it truly pays off, because it was a lovely write.
    I liked your used of language too, it was sophisticated.
    Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great work soooo many can relate.. really great work here 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    It's a really good poem. Wow. For some reason, it reminded me of my ex. He is so freakin' annoiyng! I dumped him, so now he's tryign to flirt with me. Stupid for boys, they think annoying a girl gets them to like him more. Boy he's annoiyng. Don't know why it reminded me of that. Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    I LOVE IT!WHAT A GREAT POEM! CONGRATULATIONS! IVE FELT THAT WAY SO MANY TIMES THAT I FOUND IT PERFECTLY EXPLAINED WITH WORDS, BECAUSE I KNOW HOW DIFFICULT IT IS TO SHOW THE WORLD BY WRITTING HOW UNFAIR IT MAY BECOME TO LOVE A BOY WHO DOESNT LOVE YOU BACK.GREAT WORK!KEEP IT UP!