The REMIX of the saddest song

by Chantelle   Feb 14, 2004


* You can find the original version of this poem also in the slang poems, because the original had to much um... profanity loll so I took it out and re-worded it a little so you can also see the clean version. loll hope you enjoy. Also the original has the history of why I wrote the poem and how I was inspired.

I don't know why I liked you so much.
I gave you all of my trust.
I told you, I loved you,
Now it's all down the drain,
You put me through so much pain.

I used to laugh all night,
Just talking about love.
But lately I've been jaded,
Life got so complicated.

Because you left me,
I thought I could never be able to be,
The person that now everyone else sees.
But you will never be able to see,
The person you made me out to be.

So many times I felt like letting go.
But I showed everyone,
That I'm better than you know!

Now you act as if you regretted our love,
Saying crap behind my back.
Stronger I get day by day,
So no matter what you say,
It don't mean JACK!

I never thought you'd be the one who'd slip,
But then I started to realize,
You were living one big lie.

Now we're over,
And I'm glade,
Because I'm a fool,
For loving you so bad!

Thanks for reading my poem, IT WOULD MEAN TONS
TO ME IF YOU COULD AS LEAST RATE MY POEM, and if you have time just write a comment. thanks so much!

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