My soul has been destroyed..

by Jessica   May 15, 2006


My soul
Has been destroyed
Ripped,
Thrown down,
And stepped on
You looked at me
With those hateful eyes
And said
I am sorry,
But I just
Dont love you anymore..

These words
These 10 words
Are what killed me
Are what destroyed me
And you say them
Without a second glance..

I felt more pain
Than you could ever imagine
I felt so much
That I did not know
What to do..

So I picked up a knife
My tearful reflection
Shined in the evil blade

I started carefully at first
Watching the scarlet blood
Run from my veins
And drip silently to the floor

But the pain still
Drowned my soul
So the next time I put it in deeper
Deeper and deeper
Into my pale flesh..

The pain suddenly stopped
And I fell to the ground
As I laid there
My body became
Enveloped in a huge
Pool of blood
And as the last drop
Fell from my unmoving body
I was finally free..
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* hehe.. everyone seems to be very worried about me.. lol :) dont worry, im not a cutter or anything, i just wanted to try out a sad poem.. teehee.. thanks for all your concern! *

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  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    It was a great poem, very sad. I liked it a lot, though I seem to always love almost all poems. If it's from teh heart and real i love it. Keep it up. 5/5

    ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet Angel of Darkness

    Mmmm... nice try

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Oooooooooooo
    good poem
    ...mia...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    AGAIN you asked me to comment something that i have already commented once =P ... well il just comment this one again. I think i liked it better the second time around... but i dont know. It was just as good as the first time i read it. Kinda like the second time i watched Pirates of the Carribean... aaaaaanyways your a great poet -Jen-

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    That was excellant!
    I love the words you use..I know I have said this before! But that's just coz it's so true...I love your work!

    Jen

    Comment #8