WOW! I'm really speechless, this is has to be one the best poems you've ever written! Sad but amazing! Wow, i'm wondering how you don't have the highest award in the faverots list because your amazing! Just one thought... in this line

And say
I am sorry

You might want to change say to "said" Because you switched tences in the middle of the poem from past to preasent

Wow it showed great emotion in it and you can tell it came straight from the heart 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Aww cute cute poem. It sounds like this came from your heart full of emotion and a wonderful job

Lovely poem! i relli like it 5/5! keep it up!

Aww sad yet gr8! loved it..congrats again on gettin 4th in my contest! ur way good a writer!
~*Who Cares?*~

Very dark...

thnx for the comment on tattoo..

That was too sad and painful.....nice write......and thanks 4 ur comments dear

This hits so at home...this happend to a vert very good friend of mine, but thankfully a friend found her and she is doing fine..

I love the rythem and flow of the poem and it's sad so it upsets me..but I like poems like that, so great job.

The beginning is good, up until the fourth stanza where you mentioned suicide via cutting which is terribly overused.
I admit in placed you used some vivid descriptions and it was emotive though out. But still an overused subject. Keep writing.

Aww.. that is so sad. I hope that you dont really feel that way. I know what it feels like to have the one person you love tell you that they just can't be with you anymore and it really does hurt. this poem brought a tear to my eye. You did a great job on this!

Very well written peice, the use of short lines at the begining really pull in the reader and give a sence of urgancy to the peice. you used some vvery clear descriptions and expressions thoughout this peice and wrote it well.

Wow this is so sad.. I hope that you aren't planning anything cause although this might set you free it dams the family to a life of never ending sadness... take care and stay strong.. anazing heartfelt words wonderfull chosen 5/5

Aww, wow this is extremely sad and emotional. I definately know what you are feeling here, I hope everything is going well for you. Keep this up, you are great. 5/5 xxx

Awww. This was sad. Hope everything is alright? I'm here if you need someone okay =] A very deep poem. Really liked it. You expressed your feelings so well. Keep it up and smile =] 5/5

`taleee xx

I think this is a great sad poem, it shows how people can really hurt you...I've been there. Good job. 5/5
Keep writing.

If this is something true that happened... once again i am sorry. If this isnt true then you have an extremely vivid imagination. If this rhymed... it would be basically what i write poems about. Im in love with this poem. It explains my situation as of right now to the point... its very deep and i really love it -Jen- PS. im adding you to my favorites

AWWWW... Jessy,, it is really great poem!!!! sooo sad and full of emotions!!! Well written and wonderful language~~ i love your expressions in this piece.. Keep writting and good job again~~ 5/5

For not actually being a self-harmer, you really bring out the emotions wonderfully. this is superbly haunting as well.

Very well done, i liked the way you make a great poem without rhyming.

I can see y people are worried...
it sounds like ur writting from experience! a bit of advice.. dont ever start cutting///:S
anywho
another aweseom poem...
sooo jelous!
5/5 huni