OMG this was brilliant, like reading and story, and you've made it so interesting to read, it's amazing, I love it lol, I dunno how you do it, I know I couldn't write something like this 5/5!

I like this..its realy long but a good story line. 5/5
thanks for commenting on mine

Very long but i really liked it!

U kno..u are so going on my favorites..ever poem is amazing..including this one. just wow..again:) loved the story line and details. 5/5

Another mazing pome!

That was a very well written poem, except i came across one bit that wasn't really up to scratch..

"And there’s was no more “fun” for him and so he thought
To ask Hades for help and they planned this evil plot."

.. there's a bit of a grammar mistake there, i think 'there's' is supposed to be 'there.' And plot and thought don't really rhyme.
Personally i found that particular topic a bit boring, but I've got to say, the end was definitely exciting. The last ending sentence could maybe have been a bit better though, i didn't really feel as thought it was a good, strong ending. But overall it was a good, well-written poem and it definitely deserved 5/5. well done :)