by Lomyr May 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Everybody lies to you, |
by Nate
Enjoyed the poem and the way you ended was super. |
Whoa! This is incredible Jonny! I really love it. The final stanza's my favourite though cuz it's so different from the rest of the poem and because it stands out it feels far more creepy! wooo spooky fish! :D |