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by [crimson] tearz_fall May 15, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Place your lips against mine, and let me taste your lies time after time Place your sleeve to my tears, you think you can just wipe away all my fears Place my heart in your hand and watch it break, all the happiness you managed to take Place your words in my mouth not asking how I feel, my thoughts and emotions you manage to steal Place your hand in mine, can't you feel the pain I feel inside Place a gun to my head and let me spill out the things about you never said Place this poem on my grave, and let them know that because of you my life I gave. ^*^PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT IT WOULD MEAN SO MUCH TO ME^*^ xoxo ~*~sabrina~*~
by Charlie
I agree with what symera said. you are a great writter. keep it up
by Symera
I liked your poem I liked the comparisons that you used as if everything you've given has been destroyed. Good job!