Loves not worth it

I cant deal with this no more
I could before
But now, I can't
I need a wish to grant
Is there one guy out there for me?
gee...
There like a bee
They never last, they just fly away
There like the bay
There gone, no more love
Then you get a shove
Oh, you need to move on

Don't sit their and think until its dawn
Don't sit there until you yawn
Don't sit their and think about Shawn
Don't sit their and think that he won
Don't sit their and think about john
Cause hes forgone

No one lasts forever
No one ever, never
You might think you're clever
Whatever

I know there's guys out there
IS there one who will give me a bear
I know life's not fair
I could sware
But I think I gotta say a prayer
Do you guys even care
Were are you, your not their
I need to prepare
Its so unfair
I'm not a millionaire
But you can still love me for life
I wanna be your wife
I need a husband
oh...

But I need someone for me
So i can be free
Is there anyone out there for me??

i wrote this wen i was 11..is it good for 11?