"nobody's immortal
though everyone does try"

so true!! great poem hun, as always. glad to have you back :D take care,
-xXx-

Babes r trying to say summit her cus i know i'm not immortal and i didn't really push u away as badly as the other cough *sam* cough
wuv woo always

I didn't completly get the ending...but until there i got the point and it's a pretty cool little sad story...it seemed more of a story to me then a poem which is still awesome and kick ass...definatly a 5/5, definatly glad you commented on my poem because i probably wouldn't have read your new stuff if you didnt..and it's definatly worth reading!