by Timothy r May 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Forty two hours now and wide awake |
Very powerful piece. Full of pain and turmoil. You definitely have a way of putting your feelings into words. |
by Lisa
This is such a sad poem T...and im sorry to hear your feeling so low, i think you wrote this poem perfectly and a lot of people can surely relate. |
by BlueDreams
Tim, what a brilliant penned, though sad but well expression within your emotions, No dream would be a dream if it Could pass for something real, Nor would you sail for paradise Would it its shoals conceal. best wishes for you, bert. |
Amazing poem....great job~valerie |
by Toni
Have to say i love this poem, it really captured me and i can relate in so many ways right now. looking forward to reading more of your poems xx |