I Made My Bed Of Grief
And Laid Upon Its Hell
All Because I Loved a Man
Who Persecute My Shell

^^^ that was so powerful Nikki! Great use of imagery in that stanza! Well no harsh critism from me girl I didn't think this poem was bad at all I was kinda shocked you said it wasn't your best....I thought it was very good! I love your poetry! Sometimes us poets come to find our worst pieces are the ones the readers like best..and I enjoyed this
With love
Chels

Well I Hope So Chels *Smooches* & Thank-U :) I Needed That

Harsh criticism? No, no... You've written a very sad and heart breaking poem, and the flow is simply amazing. A very much enjoyed reading this one, though it did pull at my heart. Very good work Nikki :)

Should anyone harshly criticize this their crazy. I think it's pretty good. Remember that we are our own worst critic. It kind of puts me in a blue mood and my heart breaks with the words, but it is an amazing poem.

Wow Niki I love this poem!

Somehow I always have to read your poems twice atleast. Cause when I've read the last phrase I long for more, so I just go back and read it over again.

Just wow! I love this style, it's so unique and so different from all the other poets.

I especially loved the first, 4th and last stanza. I believe they really blasted some new power into the poem.

Oh damn Niki, especially that 4th stanze.. Gggggggod it's so gggood

I Made My Bed Of Grief
And Laid Upon Its Hell
All Because I Loved a Man
Who Persecute My Shell

^^... wow.. you're so dam gifted to write so beautifully. I wish I was half as talented and I'd be so dam happy hahaha

Love you, happy to read a new poem of yours =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Harsh critism? i loved it, your silly to think it's not wonderful. 5/5
~ash

You, write a bad poem, and what are you smoking today? lol. It is not a poem, infact it is rather good love. You are a gifted writer, and even when you are bored you write with beautiful emotions. Keep writing lovely, you are a great writer and I always enjoy reading your poems.

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow, what an amazing story you told. I liked it, although i'd agree that this wasn't your best piece. I loved the 1st stanza, just wow. take care, love ya
JL

Hey i really like this poem and i can totally relate to it.. even MY best one arnt near to this good.. take a look at them... thanx

courtney cockley

As long as you can deliver such feeling and images, you are Not broken...........

one question: scared or scarred?? (the latter rhymes)..

Don't be so hard on yourself it was great, i like the rythym and rhyme. Very Good, Check mine out and keep in touch. Looking forward to reading more.

I loved your poem, it was really good, better than I could ever dream of doing. Good Job, especially for being bored!

This is a wonderful poem i love it......

Hey, this is really good!! I think that it is great, you are an awesome writer...the point is really clear...hope all is well..take care
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

If this isnt your best im excited to read the ones you think are great! i loved it! good job!
¡¿Sammy¿¡

OMG Really Good i like it a lot i will be addin you to my favorites add me if you like my stuff! Keep up the good Work pimpin'

Ya ur poem is good...u have a natural talent!

I liked it a lot so good job=)

This poem is so beautiful

Very nice poem