Duct Tape Heart

by Fallen~Tears   May 16, 2006


~Duct Tape Heart~

He didn't give a damn about her
She only wanted to make his dreams come true
She did everything she could for him
and the only thing she wanted was to hear the words " I love you"

He'd come home drunk at 4 a.m.
perfume on his chest
Just the fact that he came home
all she felt was truly blessed

Those were the nights
She tried to hide her tears away
for today wasn't that bad
and tomorrow would bring a brand new day

He could hear her silent crys
yet he'd never stop
she was just another girl
that he had got knocked up

as she sits holding her head
as the tears fall like rain
She just sat there praying to
god to take away her pain

"Dear God, please let him love me
Please let him treat me good
Please let me be the one
he hold in his arms if you only could

Please let him need me
Please let him never part
and Dear god, most of all
please fix my duct tape heart?"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Even the title i love.
    very original.
    your a good writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Connie

    This is really well written ~ very sad, but one that I bet many could relate at least in part to. I loved the ending! Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Eh... I really didn't like the ending on this.. It shot the poem. But the message was strong.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Great Job!!! i think it's GREAT!!! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    I agree with Jeremika all the way! I loved it! a GREAT love poem! perfect score