Aww.. that poem is so sad. You did a great job on this. The flow & rhythm of it was really good & I love the story behind it. Great job on this!

Awww....this is sooo exhilerating." The title and closing stanza were amazing. It is such a sweet idea....However it only started clicking by the 5th stanza up until then it was a bit narrative like.

Very, very, very sweet.....watch out for "blessed" not "blest"

Good stuff!

[lost_laureate - come find me]

I love this poem, it so true and sad also...........XJ

Cute poem!! But just so you know the title you hae above your poem is Duck tape heart? But everywhere else it is Duct taped heart!! Just thought you should know!! 5/5!!

Wow, The Poem was very well written. Written with a lot of emotion, and the Flow and Ryhme was amazing. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Such an great poem, writing with beautiful penned and flowed with beautiful emotions....i liked the way how you express them, keep writing coz it will help you, and thanks for your nice comment, much appreciated, have a good day, keep smiling and take care. bert.

Loved the title "Duct Tape Heart". Great poem.

Great title, the peice is well written with a good flow and clearly portrayed content. the final stanza is very well written finishing off the peice very well.

5/5

Good title; original. The story you told in this is so saddening, but it is true, I've seen it happen. You wrote about it very well.
I have some suggestions, if you don't mind.
You have "blest" it is spelt "blessed."
Remember to capitalise "God."
Sixth stanza, last line, I think it should be "holds."
Well done, keep writing.

Oh wow. that was one of the best poems I have read....GREAT job hun!

Hey gr8 job i really like keep up the good work plz rate comment some of mine

Okay this is offically the best poem I have ever Read! I mean that from the bottom of my heart. I'm crying right now. That was so beautifully written and so heart touching. i honestly can say I've never been so moved by a poem in my life. Would it be okay if I printed it off and showed my mom. I think she would like it also. Great job, you have pure talent. I love all the poems that you've posted but this takes the cake.

xox Tiffany

That was so sad..yet written very well done

I love your poem, it's so sincere, and well written. I liked the way you told the story and the last two stanzas are so beautiful.

Great job! 5/5

I agree with Jeremika all the way! I loved it! a GREAT love poem! perfect score

Great Job!!! i think it's GREAT!!! keep it up!

Eh... I really didn't like the ending on this.. It shot the poem. But the message was strong.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

This is really well written ~ very sad, but one that I bet many could relate at least in part to. I loved the ending! Great job!

Even the title i love.
very original.
your a good writer.