This is saddd Mark! How did you get the idea to write this one? Anywho, Awesomeness poem, Fav part;
"You're hurt because you lost a friend,
You were there for him, till the very end.
He died from an overdose in your arms,
With his love, you held in your palms."
Thats so sad. A really good way to open up the poem. Awesome job! 5/5

`taleeee xx

Omg hunni. this is sooo sad. i hope your friend will be ok in time and i knwo you will be their for her.
great poem
speak to you soon hun.
love ya xxxxxxxx

Wow, this is sad! I know a similar story with someone i know, when this guy's wife died in his arms cuz when she had her abortion, the doctors did something wrong or something....sad how stuff like that happens...GREAT poem!! I liked your rhyme scheme, and i liked the emotion in this piece. Keep up the great work hun! Love lots! 5/5
-Ashley-

This is an amazing, powerful poem, Mark. and it's great that you wrote this for your friend.

you. are. amazing.

i love you.

Aww.. so sad, and i also think its soo sweet you wrote it for you friend.. it had a nice rhyme scheme to it, and i loved the idea of the poem.. your a great writter.. keep it up 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

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It's tragic but you have to let him go,
Because now he is in a better place.. watch him glow.
There were reasons behind his death,
Each and everyday, he takes your breath.
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That was my fave stanza... you're a great poet! 5/5 good job!