by Richard May 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Oh my, you sit and laugh. |
by Megann Lee
Woooow! I love this poem. I would have to say its my favorite, there was so much emotion and feeling in it I jsut adore it Escpecially this Stanza. |
Very abstract poetry- you have a brilliant style and I like it. This was well written its so clever how you played on the words and personality came across throught the rhetorical questions....Excellent!! |
I love your poem, it is a very good poem, keep up the great work |
I agree with Taleee, it all did seem a bit forced!! This is not you r best poem but still good!! Work on it!! 5/5!! |
by Natalie
This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of it just seemed a bit forced? I dunno. Maybe work on it a little more and it'll be better. 5/5 though. |