Sink Your Fingernails Of Weeping Lead Ons.

by Richard   May 16, 2006


Oh my, you sit and laugh.
these words, I should have burned.
these feelings, I should have hid.
oh my, you sit and laugh.

closer I crawled into your space,
your breathing aisle.
forward I ran across into your arms,
your beating heart.

hey you, feel me, can you feel me?
your lips I need to kiss,
your porcelain skin, I need to kiss
hey you, feel me, can you feel me?

further away, you back toward.
from your breathing aisle,
from your weeping isle,
further away, you step across.

mind me, should I give up?
your smile gave me lies,
your tears gave me hope.
mind me, this isn't what I had in mind.

dearest, now that you know,
will you care less about me?
will you see me?
dearest, is it worse now that you know?

I understand your sadness.
my shoulder is here for you,
my life is here for you.
I understand your sadness.

oh me, just a friend.
a dying care.
a surrender
oh me, getting old.

can't you feel me?
i want more,
you fade slow.
im ending fast.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Woooow! I love this poem. I would have to say its my favorite, there was so much emotion and feeling in it I jsut adore it Escpecially this Stanza.
    "Oh my, you sit and laugh.
    these words, I should have burned.
    these feelings, I should have hid.
    oh my, you sit and laugh."
    Great Write.

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Very abstract poetry- you have a brilliant style and I like it. This was well written its so clever how you played on the words and personality came across throught the rhetorical questions....Excellent!!

    [lost_laureate]

  • 18 years ago

    by mechelle skillin

    I love your poem, it is a very good poem, keep up the great work

  • I agree with Taleee, it all did seem a bit forced!! This is not you r best poem but still good!! Work on it!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of it just seemed a bit forced? I dunno. Maybe work on it a little more and it'll be better. 5/5 though.

    `taleee xx