This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of it just seemed a bit forced? I dunno. Maybe work on it a little more and it'll be better. 5/5 though.

`taleee xx

I agree with Taleee, it all did seem a bit forced!! This is not you r best poem but still good!! Work on it!! 5/5!!

I love your poem, it is a very good poem, keep up the great work

Very abstract poetry- you have a brilliant style and I like it. This was well written its so clever how you played on the words and personality came across throught the rhetorical questions....Excellent!!

[lost_laureate]

Woooow! I love this poem. I would have to say its my favorite, there was so much emotion and feeling in it I jsut adore it Escpecially this Stanza.
"Oh my, you sit and laugh.
these words, I should have burned.
these feelings, I should have hid.
oh my, you sit and laugh."
Great Write.