That was really good, loved it.

Wonderful poem, and i know how you feel, for i once almost died, no one knows it would have been real. but my friends didn't believe me, no one really did, they couldn't see, how i really was dead.

Hey thanks everyone 4 commenting on my poem. it means a lot 2 know that u understand exactly wat im going thru and that im not the only that has felt that way.

ok 1st of all i wanna say that no matter how close of a situation any of u have been in to the one shes goin through you will NEVER know how she feels. no one will EVER truly know and thats just how it is even if she feels like shes poured out her heart and soul there will still be things that only she knows or different ppl mite know peices of her heart but NO ONE can EVER know everything about themselves AND someone else there just isnt enough room in the human mind... the human body culdnt handle all the stress that comes along with two lives... woa srry way off "topic" there. anyways i liked the poem it was ver expressive

Hey thanks Rachel. you know ur right, no matter how hard i try 2 explain wat im feeling i cant really express it enough. i think its same 4 everyone who has felt that way. thanks 4 the comment.

Hi amy. Sounds like you`ve been through the black night of the soul too. Could`nt sleep the other night so I flicked through a few poems on this site, there I was bleary eyed with over sleep when I came upon your piece. Suddenly I felt wide awake grief stricken. not the kind of grief you get when someone you heard of dies, you know the man down the street that mother used to get a paper from on a saturday (am I making sense here!)
but a personable mourning. Like in some detachet way I was standing right next to you,on the precipice to oblivion. I suppose the effect of all good art is how it moves the individual and all I can say Amy is your words have really struck a cord in me. I awoke the next morning with the line `I let myself die` rolling round my head. Such exquisite verse, I`m here applauding you.

Hey thanks 4 all the comments. wow i never thought i could have an effect on this many ppl lol its kool. thanks :)

hey...thats exactly how i felt last night, i got in a fight with my parents and when i tried to tell my mom how i felt she walked away yelling at me not even caring...your very good in writing...keep it up...kay bye...

hey...thats exactly how i felt last night, i got in a fight with my parents and when i tried to tell my mom how i felt she walked away yelling at me not even caring...your very good in writing...keep it up...kay bye...

o well thats ur opinion and i respect it

WOW WAT AN AMAZIN POEM I AM GOBSMAKED !!!