Omfg, i know exactly how this is.. cuz im the same and have been fighting it fo about 5 months so i really love how you wrote this great job, and thanks for my comment also |
Not really that great....it did give a more definite feel to what the person was going through. But the flow felt nearly forced and...just the words chosen. It could have been better but there was something about it that made it more tolerable than it wouldn've been for me. The whole concept behind it was rather well. But still something about the flow just threw me off. |
This is amazing! It sounds a lot like mine only you're writing it in the P.O.V of the one that actually has Anorexia.....If you're really going through this, you need to stop! It's no good! My friend has Anorexia and she is close to dying! She's too thin! If this is about you, gain weight! |
Oh! i really like it. I may not be chubby or anorexic. but i can relate. i had two of my closest friends die from it... 5/5! |
by Jackie*
Really good. I can totally relate to this. been struggling with anorexia for 8 1/2 years! 5/5 |
by CY GINDLE
Good poem i do like the way you write |
by Nicole
I no exactly how this is! i'v been struggling for over a year now, but have been going through therapy and all that crap for about 6 months. and since then i can honestly say that i feel much better, although i still need to regain my weight back to be considered "healthy". it's so hard but i'm trying my best to get over all this depression and the struggle to just eat. but anyway great poem and i really hope things get better for you!! |