LOW

by Lisa   May 16, 2006


Take your weight from off my chest,
let me breath again.
Remove the strings from round my heart,
let it flow again.

Put a smile upon my face,
Take away my blues,
I feel like I cant talk right now,
Its silence now I choose.

My mind is filled with thoughts so deep,
the kind that I just hate,
I cant believe I feel this way,
this cant be my fate.

I've never felt this low before,
its scratching at my skin.
Trying to steal away my life,
No feelings left within.

I sit alone and think to much,
I know that this is bad.
Though every time I try to talk,
It makes me feel so sad.

For now I'll type upon this page,
I'll hope for some release.
I pray to god that things will change,
and this agony will cease.

Im sure everyone has felt this way at sometime in their life. Your not alone x.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David R Merry

    Excelent script as usual Lisa! ... I hope you`re keeping well? xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I really like this poem. To me it feels like you want to reach out to people, and make them feel loved:D

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    A wonderfully witten and expressed peice, you wrote it such a way which make it very relatable to which adds to its strengh.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice poem. It flows really well. I liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    You are right, everyone can relate to this, I am sorry for your pain. beautifully written as always. I think I even feel the same way lately. Thanx for writng it.T