by Lisa May 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Take your weight from off my chest, |
Excelent script as usual Lisa! ... I hope you`re keeping well? xxx |
I really like this poem. To me it feels like you want to reach out to people, and make them feel loved:D |
A wonderfully witten and expressed peice, you wrote it such a way which make it very relatable to which adds to its strengh. |
by Sourav
Nice poem. It flows really well. I liked it! |
by Timothy r
You are right, everyone can relate to this, I am sorry for your pain. beautifully written as always. I think I even feel the same way lately. Thanx for writng it.T |