by Tiffany May 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I cut myself wantign to die no more do i want to cry every night i lie awake to change not to be fake it feels like no one cares about me i just want to die i dont wnat to be alive sadness is always in my heart i just want it to end & die i just wnat to start over i wnat to be accepted fro who i am i wish someone out there could understand i ask myself \'when will death come upon me\' i just wnat to jump,jump of a clift dramatically |
by Brisa
GREAT POEM. the ending could've used a little bit more detail but i liked it. awesum.xoxo |
by Natalie
Okay, Same with the other poem. It was good. The message you were trying to send was good and meaningfull, But you just need to make it so its clearer for the reader to read kay. Keep your head up -and- smile! 5/5 |