by Brigitte May 16, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A crisp sheet of paper and a pen |
Very good peice, a fairly unique theme to write upon and well implimented. the flow is good and any slight imperfection just add to the idea of having writters block. very good peice |
Most weird in a strangely nice, cool way. Very cool what with the words and flow. There is one thing on the last stanza that messes it up though: |
by Kaylee
Unique yes but repetitive which makes it kind of clear it might have been written or inspired by a really bad case of writer's block. Then again that is what kind of makes htis funny in a, "I know exactly what you mean." sort of way. |
This was a good poem!!! I do understand what you're talking about, that happens to me alot!!! Very True!! AND VERY UNIQUE!!! Great Job!! 5/5!! |
by Jessica
Awww! haha! that is so sweet! :)) and so uniquee! hehe.. i HATE it when i hav that! :P i hav to let feelings out and i just cant! hehe.. i really liked this poem! it was very good, and even tho u had writers block you seemed to write that very well :P keep up the excellent work! o, and btw, thnnx for the really nice comment! :D hehe.. i didn think my poem was that great! :P |