by Natalie
This was good. I hate when that happens, You have the emotions inside you and you wanna write them down, But you just can't seem to get them on paper. Happens alot to me strangely enough. But awesome write. Really enjoyed reading it! 5/5 |
by Jessica
Awww! haha! that is so sweet! :)) and so uniquee! hehe.. i HATE it when i hav that! :P i hav to let feelings out and i just cant! hehe.. i really liked this poem! it was very good, and even tho u had writers block you seemed to write that very well :P keep up the excellent work! o, and btw, thnnx for the really nice comment! :D hehe.. i didn think my poem was that great! :P |
This was a good poem!!! I do understand what you're talking about, that happens to me alot!!! Very True!! AND VERY UNIQUE!!! Great Job!! 5/5!! |
by Kaylee
Unique yes but repetitive which makes it kind of clear it might have been written or inspired by a really bad case of writer's block. Then again that is what kind of makes htis funny in a, "I know exactly what you mean." sort of way. |
Most weird in a strangely nice, cool way. Very cool what with the words and flow. There is one thing on the last stanza that messes it up though: |
Very good peice, a fairly unique theme to write upon and well implimented. the flow is good and any slight imperfection just add to the idea of having writters block. very good peice |