Rip Out My Truth.

by Natalie   May 16, 2006


Yell and scream at me,
Do what you wish to do.
Push and pull me around,
I won't open up to you.

Try and rip out my truth,
Find whats under the lies.
Take a good hard look,
At all the pain in my eyes.

Shake me from side to side,
Squeeze me oh so tight.
Do anything to make me,
Tell you the truth tonight.

Put your hands down my throat,
And reach further for a secret.
Something that nobody knows,
Simply just another regret.

Have a play with my buttons,
They're waiting to be pressed.
Search me for something,
That you'd never have guessed.

Copyright © Natalie, Tuesday, May 16th 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Moss

    Excellent! - "Put your hands down my throat, And reach further for a secret."
    best line by far, well done. -DM

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOW! i ADORED this.. wow.. this is just excellent.. wow. wow. wow. i cant believe you wrote this, it is so proffessional.. wow.. i loved this! it was so powerful, so sad, and dark.. it made me cringe and had great imageryy! EXCELLENT write! 10/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Ugh, Been there!
    this expressed you really well! I enjoyed it alot. I like " Try and rip out my truth,
    Find whats under the lies.
    Take a good hard look,
    At all the pain in my eyes. " the best, I dunno why. It flowed grreat and I loved the word uasge.

    All in all, great poem.x

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    I liked this poem a lot your structure was great and it was very emotive. The only critisism I've got is stanza four secret and regret kind of left me reaching for that whole rhyme however that might just have been because of my accent lol
    much love
    Aaron (remo) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Great poem! very touching, very real. great emotions. If you're wondering why i did this poem, please go back to the discussion boards. and check my post. newayz 5/5

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