Wow great poem, I sure did understand it very well and it's awesomely written. Couldn't even word it half as good if I wanted to. Good talent, keep it up and thanks for your comment, always very much appreciated. x0x x0x x0x

Sarah.

Hey! this is really good ! i like it ! keep writing check out some of my poems! -hayley

Hey that is awesome i totally understand it you are a great poet keep it up

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it. My only pet peeve is the 'secret' and 'regret' don't really rhyme... maybe in a song it could work but...oh, who cares. Great poem.

WOW! I totally understood that the first time I read it lol...Then I read your explaination and I was like "Oh I was right lol" Anyways, sorry for rambling on..I thought it was great...Good job!!!

Wow, such a powerful piece. It flowed fairly well together and kept me quote interested. I love the anaology's you used, it made me think.

The lines I believe were the most intriging were:
"Put your hands down my throat,
And reach further for a secret.
Something that nobody knows,
Simply just another regret."

Just the way its worded made it so interesting. But the only this is in that stanza, i'm not sure in 'secret' and 'regret' actually rhyme. It sort of threw me off. But other then that the flow was great. I'm sure many can relate to this poem. You definatly got your point across.

Keep up the brilliant work. 5/5

--Angie xoxo
--Member of AA Meetings =D

Very good poem. You do an amazing in getting your message across.

Yo, i like it alot it explains me all day ya know

This is a very powerful poem.... like the part about "Put your hands down my throat, And reach further for a secret." that is a ver powerful statement... see i'm a song writer.. most of my poems are songs... and since i know alot about music and songs.. i truely beleive this could be turned to an ass-kicking song!!

ROCKING MY SOCKS EVEN HARDER!
whoa that was stupid ^.... lol
Brandi Dumencic

What a sad and very moving poem. It all respects I like the sarcastic feel about this poem. Yet there were undercurrents of sadness and pain in the words. Nicely written.

[lost_laureate]

p.s Sorry my comments were so delayed and thank you for all your comments.

I really relaly liked this..5/5..it flowed very well and was just excellent. THanks for commenting on mine

Hey this si beautiful, I know the feeling of someone who just won't give up trying to make you confide.

Thankyou for your comment

love
Xx-me-xX

Wow! great poem... i really liked it

Great poem! very touching, very real. great emotions. If you're wondering why i did this poem, please go back to the discussion boards. and check my post. newayz 5/5

I liked this poem a lot your structure was great and it was very emotive. The only critisism I've got is stanza four secret and regret kind of left me reaching for that whole rhyme however that might just have been because of my accent lol
much love
Aaron (remo) xxx

Ugh, Been there!
this expressed you really well! I enjoyed it alot. I like " Try and rip out my truth,
Find whats under the lies.
Take a good hard look,
At all the pain in my eyes. " the best, I dunno why. It flowed grreat and I loved the word uasge.

All in all, great poem.x

WOW! i ADORED this.. wow.. this is just excellent.. wow. wow. wow. i cant believe you wrote this, it is so proffessional.. wow.. i loved this! it was so powerful, so sad, and dark.. it made me cringe and had great imageryy! EXCELLENT write! 10/5

Excellent! - "Put your hands down my throat, And reach further for a secret."
best line by far, well done. -DM