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by Frank Tolbert   May 16, 2006


The agony I feel when I see you
Eats me alive on the inside
I thing about being with you all the time
When I look down and see his ring
It really makes me want to die
For that ring represents you being taken
Mean\'s i\'ll never get a chance
It\' just unbearable; the pain is torture
I want you to know how much I love you
Not really sure how to show you
I don\'t want to feel this pain, I want to be with you
I want to be the one who is your best friend forever
The agony feels like my sould burning a thousand hells
I leave you saying
No matter who you are with and where ever you are, I will always love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Great poem. Very sad, however. It made me very sad, like jealously was physically eating away at my soul, for I can relate to most of it.

    Wow... that sounds harsh, but trust me, it's a compliment. You have a gift of grabbing readers into your poetry, and all of a sudden they're you, and living through what you write about. You make us feel what you feel by your words... thats talent! And it's no joke my friend; if I didn't mean it I wouldn't have said it.
    Truly Amazing!!!
    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy