From her point-of-view

by natalie   May 16, 2006


There is obviously a physical attraction
Because when you smile at me,
your waiting for my reaction.
I would give it to you in a night
but instead i only have a second.

And the only word i can mange
to get off my tongue in a second
is hey followed with a smile.
But if we had a while
i would give you more than just a smile.

You brighten up my entire day
even if you only say hey.
Because even if its only
for a moment, i crossed your mind,
And i let out a gentle sigh.

You make my eyes open wide
my mouth go dry,
my emotions go high
and my stomach fly...
If only you were mine.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Coffee And TV

    Hey... i love this poem, i'm new to all this myself, so this really is the kind of thing i aspire to, i think your conveying your feelings so well through your work, i don't know if i'm right in saying that but i would guess this poem is about yourself in the third person or something? am i right? i think if someone makes you feel like that then they should probably have the night!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pepa

    Nice poem! I love all your work! GBU! Pepa

  • 18 years ago

    by JarOme

    Oh great! i like this one:
    You make my eyes open wide
    my mouth go dry,
    my emotions go high
    and my stomach fly...
    If only you were mine

    Sounds creative! I liked it! 5/5!

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