Oh great! i like this one:
You make my eyes open wide
my mouth go dry,
my emotions go high
and my stomach fly...
If only you were mine

Sounds creative! I liked it! 5/5!

Nice poem! I love all your work! GBU! Pepa

Hey... i love this poem, i'm new to all this myself, so this really is the kind of thing i aspire to, i think your conveying your feelings so well through your work, i don't know if i'm right in saying that but i would guess this poem is about yourself in the third person or something? am i right? i think if someone makes you feel like that then they should probably have the night!