Great poem~valerie

Wow, very heartfelt. I loved it. Is this True? The flow was ok, It could be better. Overall I thought it was good though. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Impressive. Very impressive. Never read anything like it.

Brought tears into my eyes, it's breathtaking.

Very well done

Lotsaaaa love
-xxx-

This is a GREAT poem! i love it ...keep writing

"Liberty from imprisonment, where nameless souls rested.
Where forever was never a word but instead a definition."

that's a beuatiful way to describe the aftermath of the funeral - nothing more to hold on to except memories forever.
a wonderful dedication to those we don't stop to think by in our mundane, ordinary lives.

it is a real pleasure to read your work.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Wow this poem really touched my heart, it was great. Excellent work...the whole soldier topic really hits me hard. I have a family member who was drafted to the war. It's a tragic feeling to the heart, but great work. 5/5

Wow, that was beautiful....i loveded it

Wow.....that was an awesome poem...i loved it....its really from the heart....it was a very sad poem and so many people go through that.....great job