Second line says plaques me; i think you mean plagues me. I could be wrong, but i don't think you are talking about teeth. Other than that it was a well -written poem. I am not a big fan of the whole love poetry/the guy or girl i like doesn't like me type thing. And I read one other poem that you had the same theme running through. I'm not saying they're bad, but I think you could write a whole lot better and about better stuff. But I like the way you write. Upfront, in the vernacular, very clear and straightforward.