Heart just stopped

by Axle Rose   May 16, 2006


They said there was an accident,
to come here right away,
i got here quickly,
to see what had happened today.

i heard them barely whisper,
of the crash that had happened,
they said the people were killed,
this isn\'t supposed to be the end.

there was nothing more to do,
the doctors had repeated,
but nothing made any sense,
but my heart just stopped beating.

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  • This is good but you should add to it. give more detail, like who was killed and how eles you feel. great start!
    XoOx molly

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Amazing! i love the ending. u told it as if it is happening right now. llove it! read on:)