by Axle Rose May 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
They said there was an accident, |
This is good but you should add to it. give more detail, like who was killed and how eles you feel. great start! |
by Aussie
Amazing! i love the ending. u told it as if it is happening right now. llove it! read on:) |