Comments : Event of my demise

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    I suggest you speel check, seperate 'from' from 'my' and actually right out the words to and for, and capitalize all I's. That put aside, it was ok. Not the best, but ok.

  • I like the use of numbers instead of words as it gives a much deeper meaning.

    thanks for the comments you left on my poems. made me smile.

  • 17 years ago

    by HeckY

    I suggest you to copy correctly the poem of 2Pac