Gone

by Courtney   May 16, 2006


I thought you were kind
I thought you were sweet
You've done nothing to hurt me
But my feelings for you make me weak

More hours are spent crying
Than the moments you make me smile
Slowly by slowly you kill me
And drain me of my sanity

I counted on you
To make my dreams come true
I prayed you'd be the one
But instead you make me blue

My ryhmes are gone
My creativity has vanished
I'll be all good
From my mind you'll be banished.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    We can inspire others and others can inspire us. I know what you mean with the vanishing creativity. "My rhymes are gone, My creativity has vanished" really made the poem good from my point of view after one has taken the whole poem in. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    Thats really good. I like the poem a lot, for as short as it is it has a ton of meaning. good job! keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayd

    I like this one, but you lack rhyme in the second verse. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Yazdan

    THIS POEM IS SO GOOD. Something similar happened to me and i felt exactly as you described in this poem. Your wording and imagery brought tears to my eyes. This is the best poem i've read in a long time.

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