Oooh wow, i really liked this poem! there were some brilliant lines in there, and repeating the question at the end was so effective. great work!
and thanku 4 the comment! the film makes me sob too! but i love it, and i love pilgrim...and its just so amazing! hehe!
take care huni,
lots of luv xxxxx

Great work... its really amazing... its one of those poems that is gonna stay with me for the rest of the day... thanks for that... its dark, just my taste

I loved how you restated the question at the end. It just ties in the whole poem. You're an amazing writer never quit.

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WOW! i cant even describe how beautiful this poem is!!! its eksquizit (like the spelling?) soo beautiful. every sihgle one of your poems you create a world with such beautiful language. yet thier never repetitive. this poem is a true masterpiece1
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