I like this peice, the flow and structure are good and the content well layed out

I liked this poem, it may have been short, but it was still meaningful. I am no expert poet but I know you have a talent, keep up the writing. And thanks for the comment.

I think that is a good poem---I like the way that you expressed what you were trying to say, and about how the memories are slipping away. I personally like the title you gave it--The only thing I think you could improve is some of the word choice-a few parts were a little hard for me to read smoothly, but maybe its just me... overall the poem was nicely written and I enjoyed reading it

Nicely done. I like the imagery in this poem. It was well written.

There's so many ways to describe this piece. It can be a resolute ending, an angry call to arms, a soothing goodbye...wow...Really great job!

Thanks so much for your feedback!

Very nice poem, I enjoyed it alot

I do indeed enjoy this poem, and I really appreciate your comments on mine. We write in the same manor, which is very good. We can understand eachother better. Keep up the good work.