Aww....sad...that is pitiful. I think I feel the tears welling up in my eyes. It's so depressing.....gosh I love poems like that! Two thumbs hun!

Aw such a sad poem indeed. But sadly, it has porbably happened in our society. It was very beautiful and full of depth and emotion. Keep up the great writing. 5/5.

Omg that was an amazing poemm

5-5

Aw thats so sad!. i love this poem 5 babe!. check out my poems any time also! ^_^