It's actually a pretty poor poem, no offense. I think you could try balencing it out a little better. For example, to me...it just seems like it is the kinda poem that would rhyme. And the name 'Here Without You' doesn't really seem to fit. And check your grammer.

I love your poem! I think its great! And it doesnt need to rhyme. And miss thing up there at the top needs to check her own grammar. And learn how to spell grammar while she's at it.