Wow, That was amazing. It conveys so much emotion and it was beautifully written. 5/5

Woah. that was SO good. oh my gosh! anyway WOW, 5/5 for sure. that had such great detail, and the end was a suprise. gr8 work
~*Who Cares?*~

MaZiN oR wOt PpL!!!
gd job luv it!!
xxxx

Wow.. the emotion was just pouring out of that! very good! keep it up!
jessy xox

Wow, omg, i really can't say wt that says to me, really touched me deep. happy b'day by the way, erm wt u mean when u say he had died? cuz if his the policeman isnt her like alive? just wondering, bit confused. great poem never the less. loved it. 5/5. and thanx for that thing.

Wow, that was fantastic! alot of emotion, i feel like crying lol =D xxxxx

Ahhhh the beautiful poem that won
excellence...pure excellence
a well deserved 5/5
well done
emma

Omigosh....that is sooo sad....that is SOOOO wicked awsome! ....and sad. It was just like...you know...sad, and then you find out he his that boy, its like, REALLY SAD!

btw-where did you get your inspiration???

It told a beautiful story, and almost made me want to cry... Some parts I didn't understand, but I'm sure that was just me... LOL.

Wonderful poem,

Rave!

The poem was a little confusing but it was great! i wanted 2 keep on reading to find out what it was about. great way to draw ppl in! 5/5! luv ya!

This poem gave me goosebumps. great job:):):):):) excellent writing.

This poem is great i hope that you keep writting. please comment and rate my poems~DARK~

That almost brought a tear in my eye... such a sad story...
I really like the way you've written it and the concept is wondeful!
Excellent write!
5/5

OMG!!! That was.....beautiful! I mean very powerful and so unique. That was just....wow,lol! I don't really have anything to say. It was just really good! I mean really GREAT! :)! Keep it up...there's definately a lot of talent here. Really amazing!!! You're definately going in my favorites ;)!
~Midnight Sun

Wow. Breathtaking. Beautiful flow, original story, beautiful description. Great job.
5/5
♥
~Stephen White

Wow. i really dont know what to say. that took me on a ride. it wasnt as predicatable as i thought. i enjoyed this poem. good job.