Comments : Tattoo

  • 18 years ago

    by xLongxXxLostx

    Wow, That was amazing. It conveys so much emotion and it was beautifully written. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah. that was SO good. oh my gosh! anyway WOW, 5/5 for sure. that had such great detail, and the end was a suprise. gr8 work
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    MaZiN oR wOt PpL!!!
    gd job luv it!!
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. the emotion was just pouring out of that! very good! keep it up!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, omg, i really can't say wt that says to me, really touched me deep. happy b'day by the way, erm wt u mean when u say he had died? cuz if his the policeman isnt her like alive? just wondering, bit confused. great poem never the less. loved it. 5/5. and thanx for that thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by roisin

    Wow, that was fantastic! alot of emotion, i feel like crying lol =D xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Ahhhh the beautiful poem that won
    excellence...pure excellence
    a well deserved 5/5
    well done
    emma

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    Omigosh....that is sooo sad....that is SOOOO wicked awsome! ....and sad. It was just like...you know...sad, and then you find out he his that boy, its like, REALLY SAD!

    btw-where did you get your inspiration???

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    It told a beautiful story, and almost made me want to cry... Some parts I didn't understand, but I'm sure that was just me... LOL.

    Wonderful poem,

    Rave!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brianna

    The poem was a little confusing but it was great! i wanted 2 keep on reading to find out what it was about. great way to draw ppl in! 5/5! luv ya!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Campbell

    This poem gave me goosebumps. great job:):):):):) excellent writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    This poem is great i hope that you keep writting. please comment and rate my poems~DARK~

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    That almost brought a tear in my eye... such a sad story...
    I really like the way you've written it and the concept is wondeful!
    Excellent write!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    OMG!!! That was.....beautiful! I mean very powerful and so unique. That was just....wow,lol! I don't really have anything to say. It was just really good! I mean really GREAT! :)! Keep it up...there's definately a lot of talent here. Really amazing!!! You're definately going in my favorites ;)!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Wow. Breathtaking. Beautiful flow, original story, beautiful description. Great job.
    5/5
    ♥
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. i really dont know what to say. that took me on a ride. it wasnt as predicatable as i thought. i enjoyed this poem. good job.