Comments : Ian: 15

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I've never gone fishing before. I really would like to sometime, just to go out on a nice big lake, relaxing on a boat. My dad will never take me. I feel a connection with this poem. It somewhat makes me a little sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wonderful write! It is hard when someone expects you to follow in their footsteps...everyone likes to be their own person as we each value our individuality. There was a sad touch to this poem but I think you have expressed yourslef very well in this poem.