Quite hard to read... i don't mean due to it being in spanish but due to the many site errors.

but i like it, it is well written i esspessially like the lines:

"silently I scream and silently I cry expecting the peace that tries to touch the sky" hope i got that somewhere near right lol.

i like the final stanza to, though i had a little trouble understanding the final line i think i got the main jist of it.

sorry that i cannot make a more constructive comment but my spanish is limited i'm afraid.